Jack's Feedback

The feedback we had from Jack was mainly positive. He said that he liked the way the audience could walk around and said that we had a very strong opening which would engage the audience. We then had a discussion with Jack where he gave us some ideas of some other scenes we could do next. He told us that as we had a very abstract beginning, it might be a good idea to have a very naturalistic scene next. So, we came up with the idea that Alex would be a policeman and would be interrogating Raphy as to why he had pictures of the children. Meanwhile, Emily, Jack, Tuwaine and I would still pretend to be children, playing in the playground, while Sarah went around and took photos of us.

We thought it would be a good idea to have this naturalistic scene, so that our piece had some kind of narrative, but because of our beginning, it wouldn't have a narrative structure and was still all influenced from our site.

I then had the idea that we could have children's toys - randomly laid out in our site at the sides, to create more of an effect for the audience. When Jack asked us if we were going to have any music, I came up with the idea that we could have children's nursery rhymes playing on a tape throughout our piece.

We decided to brainstorm the rest of our piece and decided that after the interrogation scene, we would have a scene where the police find where they were keeping us, so Sarah was going to run in and say, "Come on kids! We're leaving." and make us pack our bags and run off with her, just before the police come to find us. We haven't blocked that scene yet, but thought it would be a good idea as it leaves the audience in suspense and allows us to use our stimulus more, as they still don't know where all the children's bodies, who were taken by Brady and Hindley are.